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October 03, 2010

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susan sullivan

Very,interesting,insightful review,Paul.SS

Paul aka pt at large

Thank you, Susan. I hope others who see this production weigh in with their take on the play.

Ann

So how is the acting? Is it worth 21/2 hours of my life ? Can I get through the boring part because the rest of the story is well written and acted ? This is what I need to know . What do you think.? I think you have mixed feelings about this play. It is okay to say, I didn't like it and here is what is good and works in the telling of the story. And here is what didn't work for me. And do you not like the story, or the acting or both ? Just some questions I have.

Keep on writing. I'll keep on reading , especially the theatre pieces.

Thanks,
Ann

Paul aka pt at large

Really valuable feedback, Ann. Here you go...
The play doesnt elevate from the telling of a story to an affecting theater experience.

I cant tell whether the problem was in the writing or the directing or the acting but, for me at least, something was lost in translation. The acting was adequate, competent, but neither of the three main characters illuminated their roles with sufficient pain/passion to make them come off the page. The biggest problem is with Dr Givings wife Catherine. Anne Gottlieb cloaks Catherine's longings and frustrations too long with portraying her as a flaky flibbertigibbet, plays her for comedy, and the switch to a more sympathetic character is a bit bumpy, too often interspersed with sight gags, that detract from her unhappy, unfulfilled sense as a wife and a woman. Considering the story line, the play fails if we cant relate viscerally enough with Catherine and her plight.

Craig Wesley Divino's turn as the artist in the beginning of act 2, as terrific as it is, seems like a device Ruhl uses to introduce sexual tension, the idea of romantic love in marriage, and spur Catherine into becoming pro-active in determining her role in her marriage and initiating a sexually satisfactory marriage with her husband.

I wonder if with a different cast or with different directorial input Sarah Ruhl's play about technology, culture, sex, and science would have produced a more visceral result. So, to answer your question, I dont think this play is worth 2 1/2 hours of your life.

Thanks for your comment. It gave me a chance to reassess the play.
What feedback have you heard from others who saw this play? Is this feedback more helpful?
pt

Ann

Oh this feedback is really helpful. I haven't heard anything. And I'll ask around .

How come you didn't say all this in your review ? It is helpful to your readers to express your opinion. It is what YOU SAW AND HEARD that we need to know. Someone else may see and hear it differently.

We as readers have to understand how the writer sees and hears. It is how we (the reader) learn that we may have a different opinion and that may reveal more about us to us.
Also, if you see a character that doesn't ring true to his role, it can be stated in such a way as to give both the reader and the actor/ director/writer some information that allows for improvement/alteration. I don't mean to sound preachy here, I'm saying your reviews are becoming more relevant to the whole production and audience.
What you have written here is beneficial to all. ........Of course, this is just my humble opinion.

Thanks for all written words,
Ann

Paul aka pt at large

One of the perplexing things about going to a play is that I have certain expectations based on the advertising for it (example, the NYT snippets re this play - “insightful, fresh, and funny”) which may or may not pan out. RE reviews, I don't usually read other reviews before I attend a play in order to experience the play through my own lens, not that of another reviewer. I transcribe my scribbled notes, then write a first draft of my review.
I ask for a "press kit" when I buy my ticket. The press kit is useful for all sorts of background information that other reviewers (I assume) and I use in formulating our writing. Once I've established my sense of what worked and didn't work in the play, I'll re read the press kit background and use whatever information I need to complete what I write and I'll read what other reviewers have said about the play.
Sometimes, I feel like the kid who shouted, "Hey, the Emperor is wearing no clothes!" - the play just doesnt match the hype. Other times, I'm in agreement with other reviews. It's rare that my essential vision of the play will be substantially altered by reading other reviews. Sometimes other reviewer's observations help me buttress my own instincts, sometimes they don't.
One issue I grapple with is moving from third person to first person. I used a little of both when I responded to you, maybe that's the way to go.
Paul

Ann

OOOps. I think I didn't put into words that translated, what I meant. I understand, accept and agree with your return comment. And some day I'll have to have this conversation with you in person.

What if you knew nothing of the play ? What if you just went , sat in the seat and saw the play ? I ask because that is the way I've been going to the theatre for over 30 years. I think people want a good story well told. And I think they want actors who bring the characters alive. And sets , costumes and lighting that enhance the whole production without calling too much attention to themselves. And if all of those things are working really well, they will often make a less than stunning script into a worthwhile night in the theatre.

More HEART pt, along with your wonderful brain. Keep writing . I love reading what you see.

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